托福独立口语模板：作为志愿者，帮助老人时你想做什么

托福独立口语模板：作为志愿者，帮助老人时你想做什么

托福独立口语高频话题

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:advertisements have too much influence on consumers’choices?

学生对此话题的表述答案

Well,I agree with the statement.We know that advertising is a way for company to attarct more consumers to buy their products.To some extent,some companies will just show good things of their products on advertising,but they didn't show bad things.Besides,I think the advertising spokeperson will influence consumers.For example,just for me,if i see my idol on the advertising,i will immediately to buy their product.So i couldn't agree with the statement that advertising will influence consumers.

批改意见

语法方面出现的错误(Grammar)

1 show good things of products————show the good things about

2 on the advertising————on the advertisement

表达部分存在的问题(Expression)

1 I will immediately to buy————I will immediately want to buy/immediately buy

2 I couldn't agree with the statement————I couldn't agree more with the statement

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I agree that companies use advertisements to make people buy their products.Some companies only show the good things about their products,but they did not show the bad things.Another example is that the spokesperson will influence consumers to buy their products.For example,whenever i see my idol in an advertisement,i immediately want to buy the product.So i couldn't agree more that companies use advertisements to make people buy their products.