托福独立口语模板：你会选择摄影等哪种艺术形式？

托福独立口语模板：你会选择摄影等哪种艺术形式？

托福独立口语高频话题

If you were to study a new form of art,which would you like to choose,wood sculpture,portrait painting,or photography?

学生对此话题的表述答案

If I were to study a new form of art,I would choose photography.Because I want to record the beauty of the world.In my mind,the morning glow,blooming flowers,???green trees,and even the every day lives of people around me are worth recorded.Also,I'm a big fan of travelling.I'd like to take a lot of pictures during my journey.I believe,after many years,when I look back to those pictures I took.They will recore/recall those happy moments from memory.Besides,by sharing the pictures I took,others can also share my happyness and sadness,which can promote the relationship between us.

批改意见

语法方面出现的错误(Grammar)

1 are worth recorded————are worth recording

表达部分存在的问题(Expression)

1 they will recore those happy moments from memory————they will bring back happy memories

2 relationship between us————their relationship with me

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If I were to study a new form of art,I would choose photography.Because I want to record the beauty of the world.In my mind,the morning glow,blooming flowers,???green trees,and even the every day lives of people around me are worth recording.Also,I'm a big fan of travelling.I like to record the pictures of my journey.I believe after many years,when I look back to the pictures I took,they will bring back happy memories.Besides,by sharing the pictures I took,others can also share my happyness and sadness,which can promote their relationship with me.