2021年11月6日雅思作文考试真题及范文

2021年11月6日雅思作文考试真题及范文

Task1:柱图

Task 2:Nowadays,people use social media to keep in touch with others and be

aware of the news.Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages.

本周考题及分析

More and more people use social media to keep in touch with people,news and

events.Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

这道题也属于经典题重现了，social media&Internet是一个非常重要的母话题，同学们

一定要针对该类题月积累足够多的观点库和地道词组。道题的问题类型‘优点是否大干缺

点’，同学们需要注意以下几点：

1.因为问题中的advantages&disadvantages都有复数，所以同学们必须优缺点各写至

少2个点

2.outweigh需要同学们把优缺点进行比较，有下列两种方式：

-优点*3＋缺点*2/缺点*3＋优点*2（多的多写一个点）

一优点*2+缺点＊2＋结尾段写一个比较句（为什么优点/缺点更重要）

一般情况下，小编是推荐第二种写法的，因为第一种写法需要同学们写5个点，这样考试

的时候压力会很大。而第二种写法只需要在最后一段写一个相对固定的比较句就能拿到这道题

的outweigh分数了。

那么，带着上面这些要点，我们一起来看范文吧！

范文鉴赏

More and more people use social media to keep in touch with people,news and

events.Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

满分词汇：

access/inaccessible v./adj.接触/无法接触

current affairs n.最新资讯

in the globe prep.世界各地

privilege n.特权

up-to-date adj.实时的

selectively subscribe v.选择性订阅

minors n.青少年

misguide v.误导

positively informative adj.能提供正面信息的

discretion n.审慎

hate comments n.喷子言论

论点1:Mass media allows the public to have access to current affairs in the globe,

which used to be a privilege for only social elites a century ago.

展开1:Compared with information spreading in the past,which were normally

inaccessible by ordinary people,people nowadays can acquire virtually any up-to-date

news using no more than a mobile device,or even selectively subscribe to their favorite

ones in various mass media platforms.

论点2:It is normal for the general public,especially minors,to be misguided by

the information delivered by mass media.

展开2:Although most of mass media is positively informative,underage

audiences,who rarely have any discretion,are easily to fall victim to some of the

misleading information from mass media.such as commercials or hate comments on Internet media.

雅思写作中需要避免的词汇

1)累赘：It is essentially very hot in Hangzhou now.

2)累赘：Travelling is so good.

3)累赘：Doing this job is really hard for me.

这些句子都比较啰嗦，表达不明确，用词普通，这种叠加的想强调程度的，应该用正式的、强烈的高级词汇进行同义替换，比如：

1)推荐：It is scorching in Hangzhou now.

2)推荐：Travelling is wonderful.

3)推荐：Doing this job is difficult for me.