2017年7月15日雅思写作考试小作文范文

2017年7月15日雅思写作考试小作文范文

The table below shows the percentage of people living in three types of dwellings in Australia in 2001 and 2006.

这个题目属于动态图，且稍复杂，数据繁多。但注意，尤其是对于这种数据多的题，在时间有限的情况下，并不需要把每个数据都写到，要抓重点。本文要抓住两种重要的比较，一种是每个地区每种住房类型两年间的趋势变化，即每种住房类型的居民比例是上升了还是下降了还是保持平稳不变。另一种是每个地区每种房屋类型之间的比较，此题中，住House的偏多，其他种类偏少。在抓住重点的基础上做到概括性地比较，就可以做到既信息全面又不会在小作文上花太多时间导致大作文写不完。

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The table provides information about the proportion of people who lived in different types of dwellings in three places in Australia in two separate years.

In terms of the percentage of residents in Victoria, the figures for house and other remained stable in two years at 76%,(which was the highest figure across all the figures for Victoria) and 1% respectively. And the inhabitants who chose to live in semi-detached and flat experienced a slight increase from 12% and 11% to 13% and 12% respectively.

As for the situation in Northern Territory, most residents, the percentage of dwellers who lived in house decreased marginally from 67% in 2001 to 65% in 2006 although most residents still lived in this kind of dwelling. The same trend can be found in the figure for other (dipped from 12% to 11%). By contrast, only 9% and 8% people lived in semi-detached and flat in 2001 while slightly more people (10% and 9%) lived in these two types of dwelling in 2006.

Regarding to the situation in Tasmania, the majority residents lived in house, despite a minor drop from 88% to 86%. And the proportion of people living in other three types of dwelling was marginal and steady in both years.