剑桥雅思写作13test1真题解析及范文

剑桥雅思写作13test1task1真题解析【题目+解题思路+范文】

题目：

WRITING TASK 1

You should spend abo

20 minutes on this task.

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

解题思路：

1. 图表类型：地图题

2. 主体段时态：一般过去时

3. 题目要求：

两幅地图分别展示了2007年和2010年去城市医院的通行道路。选择一些主要的特点来描述并作出一些相关的对比。

4. 描述重点：

1)2007年地图中的city hospital的东南风是staff and public car park，而在2010年这个地方变为了staff car park。

2)2007年Hospital Rd 两边的六个bus stops 没有了，在道路西边建造了较大的bus station， 并有道路通往北边和南边两个环岛，分别与围绕医院的ring road 和city road相连。

范文：

SAMPLE ANSWER

This is an answer written by a candidate who achieved a Band 5.5 score. Here is the examiner’s comment:

The candidate has identified all the key features (hospital, ring road, new public car park, staff car park and bus station in 2010) but the descriptions are not always accurate e.g. [two features that still remained. This two features are City Hospital and staff carpark] whereas the staff car park was formerly a car park for both staff and public, while the mention of the bus station is not developed. Organisation is clear, however, with some good use of cohesive devices [According to | Apart from | The further additional features], although there is an error in the use of reference pronouns [This/These two features]. The range of vocabulary is sufficient for the task [two different years | features | remained | additional], though [features] is over-used. A spelling error is noted in the second line [sourrounded] but this does not cause any difficulty for the reader; similarly, the use of [around-turn] can be easily understood as ‘roundabout’. There is a mix of simple and complex sentences, mainly used accurately.

Two maps illustrate, the way to get to a city hospital of two different years (2007 and 2010).

According to both maps, the main features which is city hospital is sourrounded by Ring Road. In these two maps, there have been two features that still remained. This two features are City Hospital and staff car park. Apart from these two features there are some features that shows on 2010 map but haven’t shown on 2007 map. The additional features that appear on the map of 2010 are public car parte which located on the east-side of the city hospital. The further additional features are two around-turn on the hospital Rd. which can lead to the bus station.

Overall, there are two major features that never change on both 2007 and 2010 map. These features are city hospital and staff car park. However, there are some additional features that appear on the map of 2010 but not on 2007. These features are public car park, bus station and two around-turns.