2022年8月27日雅思大作文范文:人们是否有自由做任何运动

2022年8月27日雅思大作文范文:人们是否有自由做任何运动

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic:

Some people think that dangerous sports should be banned,while others think people should have the freedom to do any sport or activity.

Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

【话题分类】

社会生活类

【题目解析】

题目大意：有些人认为危险运动应该禁止，而其他人则认为人们应有自由做任何运动或活动。

题型特点：本题属于多方观点讨论题型。考生须对话题中对立的双方观点展开讨论，并表明作者自己的立场。

本文结构：开头段引入话题和表明立场、三个主体段分别论述三方观点，结尾重申个人立场。

【难点】本题话题并不难理解。但构思过程中应该注意将话题相关概念（例如危险运动是什么、危险的原因在于什么等）作具体化处理，避免过于笼统。

【写作思路】

开头段：众所周知，一些体育锻炼方式，特别是参与让人肾上腺素飙升的冒险运动，可能导致受伤甚至死亡。尽管担忧不无道理，但彻底禁止这些活动不一定是最佳解决方案。

主体段1：有些人赞成全面叫停易发事故运动，他们的观点可以理解。家长们将孩子的安全放在首位，可能欢迎这一政策。这些学习者年纪尚小、技巧生疏，尽管只在有经验的专业人士监督下尝试危险动作——如拦截对手——仍有扭伤和骨折的风险。同样，救援工作者会支持对危险活动进行严格监管。他们经常被派往偏远地区搜索和运送受伤的登山者和攀岩者，很清楚除了不可预测的因素，疲劳和热身不足都会让专业和业余人士受伤。

主体段2：还有一些人说，参不参加有风险活动是个人选择，当局不应该微观管理。青少年醉心于测试自身身体极限，又因此得到同龄人认可，所以热衷于尝试惊险动作。他们认为跑酷和花式自行车技巧尽管存在风险，但不应被当局限制。有经验的极限运动爱好者也认为自己有权对活动作出判断。他们通常持有相关能力证书和培训记录，所以认为规避风险的政策并不合理、过于武断。

主体段3：我认为这个问题取决于涉及的具体行为和可用资源。就接触性运动而言，训练和比赛通常有专用场地，具有必要的技术和医疗支持，因此没有必要禁止活动。相比之下，有些项目依赖自然环境——尤其在偏远地区开展——危险性可能大增。所以，在彻底研究活动地点并配备必要设施之前，应禁止在那里开展洞穴潜水和其他探险活动。

结尾段：总的来说，尽管经常出现受伤甚至死亡，但全面禁止危险运动并不合理。只要运动项目能确保合理的安全水平，就可以向爱好者开放。

【参考范文】

It is common knowledge that some types of physical exercises,especially adrenaline-packed adventure sports,can cause injuries or even fatalities.Despite legitimate concerns about these activities,it is not so certain whether outright prohibition is the best solution.

Some people support a ban on all accident-prone sports and I can understand their point of view.Parents probably welcome this policy,because of the priority placed on the safety of their children.These young,unskilled learners are often at risk of sprains and fractures,even though they only attempt risky moves,such as tackling an opponent,under the watch of experienced professionals.Similarly,rescue workers would support stringent control of access to dangerous activities.Routinely dispatched to remote locations to find and transport injured mountaineers and rock climbers,they understand how fatigue and insufficient warmup,besides unpredictable factors,can result in injuries for professionals and amateurs alike.

Others who say that participation in risky activities is a matter of personal choice and should therefore be free of micromanagement by the authorities.Teenagers,drawn to the idea of testing their physical limits and the associated peer recognition,are keen to try stunning maneuvers.They would argue that the freedom to perform parkour moves and freestyle bike tricks,despite the risks involved,should not be limited by the authorities.Experienced extreme sports enthusiasts,too,believe that they are entitled to judgement calls about their own activities.They typically hold relevant competency certificates and training records,so they can find risk-averse policies unreasonable and arbitrary.

I think the question depends on the type of actions involved and the resources available.As far as contact sports are concerned,training and competitions usually take place in purpose-built venues that feature necessary technical and medical support,so there is no need to ban these activities.On the other hand,sporting events heavily reliant on the physical environment,especially those in hard-to-reach locations,may be substantially more dangerous.This is why cave diving and other forms of adventure should be disallowed until a site has been thoroughly studied and equipped with necessary facilities.

In general,despite the often-cited injuries and even fatalities,it is not reasonable to impose an across-the-board prohibition against dangerous sports.Enthusiasts can be given the freedom to participate in their favourite form of exercise as long as a reasonable level of safety can be ensured.

(392 words)

【语言积累】

1.adrenaline-packed让肾上腺素飙升的

2.accident-prone意外频发的

3.at risk of sprains and fractures有扭伤和骨折的风险

4.tackling an opponent拦截对手

5.under the watch of experienced professionals在经验丰富的专业人士监督下

6.stringent control严格监管

7.fatigue and insufficient warmup疲劳和热身不足

8.micromanaged by the authorities由当局微观管理

9.peer recognition同辈、同龄人的认同

10.entitled to有权享用/做某事