雅思大作文范文：手机交流对个人和社会的影响

雅思大作文范文：手机交流对个人和社会的影响

雅思大作文题目：

Anybody can use a mobile phone to answer work and personal calls at any time,7 days a week.Does this development have more positive or negative effects on both individuals and society?

【话题分类】：社会生活类

【题目分析】：

题目大意：大家都可以随时用手机来接听工作和个人的电话。这对个人和社会是有更多积极影响还是消极影响？

题型特点：积极和消极影响都分别需要分析，同时考生需要最后明确立场。

本文论文推进：开头引出当下趋势和争议，表明自己立场。中间段分别分析这种随时可以使用手机接打电话的现象，对个人和对社会分别的积极消极影响。结尾总结论点，重申观点。

【参考范文】

Mobile phones have become readily available for modern people,enabling easy access to various phone calls at any time.While embracing this innovation and appreciating its benefits,people have largely recognized the detrimental effects on individuals and society.In my opinion,the negative influences outweigh the positive ones.

Undeniably,the high accessibility of phone calls promotes efficiency on both individual and society level.For the general public,they have achieved a much higher productivity in workplace,because work communications are no longer impeded by geographical barriers and time restriction.Likewise,personal connections have been made so convenient that any family member or friend seems only a phone call away.In turn,the whole society gains an increased speed of information exchange and overall economic development,since the mobile communication industry associates the whole world in every sense.

However,the drawbacks of this always-on culture have emerged and alarmed the public.Overwhelming phone calls from work perplex and disturb individuals’daily life,blurring the boundary between personal life and work and giving rise to a society where most working population find it formidable to achieve work-life balance.Another insidious danger lies in public health and safety,because the obsession with phone calls can lead to various ill habits,such as answering mobile phone while driving.For the society,this trend also poses negative repercussions in the long run.The public social relation has become more indifferent than before,precisely due to readily accessible phone calls.In other words,people have been so drawn to the idea of making a call that they are alienating each other in real life.This breakdown of social bonding would further endanger the sustainability of social structure.

In conclusion,while admitting the positive influences of people being able to connect with mobile phones,I personally contend that the downsides are more significant for both individuals and the society,considering the damage to our current life and possible long-term consequences.

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【亮点词汇及短语】

1.readily available现成的，随时可以的

2.easy access to方便取用的

3.embrace(v.)拥抱，接受

4.appreciate(v.)重视，欣赏

5.have largely recognized已经很大程度上意识到

6.detrimental effect不利的影响

7.on…level在…层面(e.g.on individual level)

8.impede(v.)阻碍

9.geographical barrier地理障碍

10.associate(v.)连接