12月24日雅思写作task1回忆:中国石油生产和消耗情况对比

12月24日雅思写作task1回忆:中国石油生产和消耗情况对比

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The line graph below shows the oil production and consumption in China between 1982 and 2006.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

*图形根据考场回忆，具体信息略有出入

注：图形根据考场回忆绘制，具体细节或有出入。

【图形分类】

线形图

【题目解析】

根据图中信息，可以如下布局：

开头段：转述题目；

综述段：归纳两条趋势之间的异同；

主体段1：介绍第一阶段的数据特征（区别有限）；

主体段2：介绍第二阶段的数据特征（差距增大）。

【写作思路】

开头段：该图提供了一个东方国家在25年间的石油产量和消耗量信息。

综述段：总的来说，两个类别都有上升的趋势，尽管消耗的上升幅度更大。

主体段1：最初的十年，这两种趋势之间相对平衡。具体而言，两者早在1982年都处于每天200万桶的水平，属于最低记录。4年后，生产能力提高了50%，一直持续到1994年。这时，它被消耗量超过，而消耗量是在1990年后才开始增长的。

主体段2：上述的生产赤字在随后几年里进一步扩大。这时，由于对石油的需求不断增加，在2006年急剧攀升到每天600多万桶，比1982年的数字大三倍。相反，这种强劲势头超出该国的产能提升，因为在同一时期，产量只增加了50万桶。这意味着，到2006年为止，产量不足（每天200多万桶）的情况已经大大恶化。

【参考范文】

The chart provides information about how much oil was output and used in an oriental country over the course of 25 years.

In general,there were upward trends in both categories,although more substantially in the case of consumption.

The initial decade saw a relative balance between the two trends.More specifically,both started at 2 million barrels per day in 1982,the lowest level recorded.This was followed by a 50%rise in the production capacity 4 years later,which continued at the same level until 1994.This was when it was surpassed by consumption,which had only started to grow after 1990.

The production deficit reported above further widened over the subsequent years.Here,due to an increasing demand for oil,there was a steep climb to over 6 million barrels per day in 2006,three times larger than the 1982 figure.Such growth momentum,on the other hand,was not matched by the country’s production,as it only rose by 0.5 million barrels over the same period.This means that by 2006,insufficient supply(over 2 million barrels per day)had worsened substantially.

(186 words)

【语言积累】

1.output(v.)产出

2.upward trends上升趋势

3.categories类别

4.a relative balance相对平衡

5.production capacity产能

6.surpass超越

7.production deficit产能不足

8.a steep climb急剧攀升

9.growth momentum增长势头

10.insufficient supply供给短缺