2022年4月30日雅思写作回忆:世界范围内四种鱼的数量

2022年4月30日雅思写作回忆

WRITING TASK 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The chart below shows the number of four different species of fish between 1982 and 2007.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

注：图形根据考场回忆绘制，具体细节或有出入。

【图形分类】

线形图

【题目解析】

这是一篇典型的折线图，描述了从1982年到2007年四种不同种类的鱼的数量变化。从图中可以看到四条线段的特征都非常明显，Atlantic Cod和Yellowfin Tuna的数量最开始都在150000以上，而且在这25年时间里呈现下降趋势，然而Haddock和Swordfish却都低于100000，其中Swordfish的量一直都处于非常少的状态。

【写作思路】

开头段： 改写题目

综述段： Atlantic Cod和Yellowfin Tuna呈现下降趋势，然而Haddock和Swordfish保持不变。Swordfish在这一段时间里都是最小值。

主体段一： 描述Atlantic Cod的变化趋势

主体段二： 描述Yellowfin Tuna和Haddock和Swordfish的变化趋势

【参考范文】

The line graph illustrates how the number of four different types of fish worldwide changed from 1982 to 2007.

Overall, the Atlantic Cod and Yellowfin Tuna witnessed a declining trend toward the end of the period, while Haddock and Swordfish remained unchanged. It is evident that the number of Swordfish was at the minimum in numbers throughout the 25 years.

In 1982, Atlantic Cod held the largest proportion among four species, accounting for nearly 230,000. However, it dropped sharply in the next ten years, reaching 150,000 by 1992. Afterwards, this figure picked up again and climbed slightly to appropriately 170,000 in 2002, but decreasing to less than 150,000 in 2007.

Yellowfin Tuna, serving as the second largest number of fish species, started at 150,000 in 1982. In the next ten years, it experienced an opposing tendency to Atlantic Cod, rising to a peak of 200,000 in 1992. Following this, there was a sharp fall of around 4000 for every five years and finally went down to 100,000 in 2007. Haddock and Swordfish demonstrated a similar trend, leveling off at nearly 70,000 and 10,000 in numbers throughout the given period.

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